After the feedback from Alan and Phil I was told to try and make the animatic clearer, make more sense to people and to up the size of the screen and more drawings to show the movement's and expressions more. So I have cut out what I thought was boring/ wasn't needed like me talking about other things not just buzz etc..as I think it is better to focus on the characters and the main story which is I loved this thing when I was younger this is the cute story however what I liked got me bullied and then I now like this thing and if these two versions of me met I would be like this and tell the story. I have tried to keep things to one example rather than trying to use many examples for one thing..feedback is needed on whether this is better. The audio however is still the same and I will re-record when I know this part is correct. However it worked as a base for me to re do this...also I used a different program to do animatic's I used photoshop and did it on a timeline and I found this much more efficient than past ways I have tried to do this.
Also I hadn't gone over the other orthographs when we left before so I have done these and kept the illustrator files just incase of a problem. I have done the younger version of myself but I hadn't done the older version so I got these views done however I do need to scan one more in as I forgot to and do that one which is the top view. I would like to know what it is I need to do next as I feel kind of lost now?.
Orthogrophs I did to add to my others:
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