Premise Animatic Progress@Phil@Alan

I have been working on the next part where I mention bullying and trying to keep it simple I've also put both this clip with my first clip to have a look at them together..next I need to draw out what will be shown for when I discuss me and warhammer 40k and then when both my past and present self meet.
after I have a rough animatic of every part with the voice over I am going to see what I need and can add to improve it and then I am also going to do concept art as the animatic is rough..so I can better understand what it will look like in the different scenes. with a written description of what is flat, 3d and coloured, not coloured, how they could be possible and what I'm aiming to show the most.

Clip I have been working on.

I also have been trying to figure out which brush I think is better for the drawing parts of the animation e.g. the image planes and scenes like this one that don't have the 3d character's, the first clip was bolder thicker lines. This is more sketchy like a pencil which I think I might prefer.