Feedback from todays pitch

Three Act Structure

• Sets the scene Establishing shot outline body etc Heart working (SA node) ( Done the silhouette ) need to not have pacemaker at beginning.
• Heart stops working (SA node) ( Noise goes irregular ) ( Haven't done yet )
• Pacemaker is fitted solving the problem ( Blood and Regular Rhythm  ) Done50/50 added pacemaker.

Other things:

• Labelling not needed as this age group should already know the cardiac system for example.
• Focus should be on why and how the heart gets a constant rhythm.> script and research the rhythm. model the waves? to fit with the sound also? visual representation?
• Sound doesn't necessarily have to be a drum and heart mixed together.
• Background? Black image plane? or painted? lights? Still a thought at the moment.