Quarter view done and another drawing

I measured with the previous drawings and did the older me quarter view drawing (ortho) . 

Next I'm gunna do a drawing if them both together I thought if doing it where they are both doing as hero pose young one infront if old one. 

I'm not really a huge fan of this one hence I'll likely do another as described above. 

Top view and quarter view progress ortho

OK so this is the top view and quarter view of the younger me which I have done to scale and tried to do as accurate as measured using the other drawings and ruler. (an ortho graph drawing) need to scan in. 

I used some accuracy for this but was just trying to draw another pose and have it where I'm sad. (not an ortho) 

(going to be ortho) this top view of older me needs tweaking, I am also working on the quarter view so that should be up soon. Aswell as some more expression and body linguistic drawings of them both. 

Rough second animatic complete

Going to be working on the quarter views and top view drawings and them doing things/holding things for orthograph's this weekend.

More orthographic drawings and Drawings for Animatic.

Next I need to do top views with one arm up and quarter views and also perspective ones of them doing things. Also I have drawn out all the rest of the storyboard for animatic. I just have more recordings to do and edit it all together and export I have all the drawings though. Ill try get this up as soon as possible.

Side View of young me (Buzz)

Side View of older me (Space Marine IW)

Back View of older me (Space Marine IW)

animatic drawing work today: so this is after the lamp stuff (Bullying Pixar parody I did which is in the video I put up.) Because I need to edit all this into that animatic I decided to just post this for now and explain some things.

Me on top of dice introduced into Warhammer dice etc.( big dice just like how the beginning was a big cake.)

This shot needs to be the opposite of the beginning because I was being denied to be buzz at the wedding, now I'm happy because I'm being who I want anyway even as I'm older. Its an overcoming what people think and say and so on.

 Ok so when I mention the various races i spoke to Alan and he said to keep it simple and I ended up with characterising the races by showing there paints e.g. the describing words like nurgle green, horns etc and trying to get as much personality as possible.

When I mention perturabo I have decided not to show him but to indicate his importance to me this is done by zooming into my shoulder arm piece where it has the logo of the iron warriors his indicates he is the leader of the armor/army I am wearing and then when you see me I am enthusiastically moving my arm up in a powerful and heroic role model way with the arm guard logo in shot.

When I mention I like to command my units I authoritatively point like an order and have dominance, camera looking up at me and then when I say detailed miniatures I have stood onto a base that the miniatures go on to replicate a miniature as myself. 

When I say I like the conflict some explosions or chaos could occur.

Zooms into a very inspiring older Georgia.

My younger self meets my older self and see's them above onto of a huge dice in awe. 

cuts to them both back to back shooting. And then close up smiling at each other.

where I say I know how people may think how stupid it all is.. I have decided to make it more humorous like the older me is pulling silly face's and younger me is laughing an then there is a close up of older me (present smiling and it ends.)

sculpted ears

I think one of the ears is pretty good but othe rone needs abit of cleaning up if I get time.. As I have other work to do. but I'm glad I Atleast go the chance to see what I could do. 

Added more to Premise

So today I added the bullying part the idea is to have the words Weird but in a Pixar style way e.g. tomboy studios instead of animation studios, then as I speak about how I reacted to the bullying I start punching and kicking, attacking the letter I' just as I have succeeded in pushing it over the lamp that jumps on the I in Pixar shows up for a second  to do his duty realising that the I is about to fall and hops away crazily, scared this is the humorous part and then I started the storyboarding for the Warhammer part just like the beginning I am sad I am not allowed to be buzz. however now I'm grown up and I can play Warhammer, and so its the same kind of shots but rather than being on a cake I'm on a dice....and rather than being sad I have overcome bullies etc I am happy looking up etc and also the camera was going down to show the shortness last time but this time the tallness...I need put the new recordings in for my next part so its more accurate but yeah..I storybaorded a lot of stuff but it was too violent etc so this is what I ended up with I have a few more ideas to carry on tomorrow.

Animatic beginning redone next part bullied and Warhammer.

Animatic beginning redone next part bullied and Warhammer.:

The animatic starts off with the title then the camera moving low to get to me ( when I was younger=small.) then me confused at wy I couldn't wear the outfit to a family wedding showing me small on a huge wedding cake next to wedding figures. and then walking off sad holding my wings as if I cannot use them. then. imagine me.. then you see me in the outfit preparing myself imagining all the fun stuff I could do so you see me press the button and the wings come out. Then you see the wedding cake, glasses etc normally but with targets on them and see them transform into zurgs troops and move forward and a close up of the figures in burg cakes grasp. then I go on to say I'm to the rescue and so diagonally I fly into shot shooting at the enemies then it pauses. at this point then you hear me say but it wasn't just buzz and I talk about other tv shows etc and so you see me changing the channel after zooming out and seeing I was watching myself being buzz on tv and after showing the costume and figures I have it goes to the clock to show the time I take on my interests then this morphs/transitions into the gender icon male as I explain how I prefer male character this gets changing details turns into female icon damsel in distress and then this circle transitions into a bored Georgia buzz lightyear in a class with hands on face whilst a group of girls talk about there girly stuff and I don't quite fit in.

Thick outline@Alan

now I am just missing a scanned in drawing of side view to orthograph. Im working on the front Older me character now.

I think it would help to do the drills when I have time also because the one I don't understand yet is the thin to thick line.

However I think for this I would like it like this. then repeat for the other orphos.

oh and also erased the curve ends that looked more messy.

I was also thinking earlier that my backgrounds/image planes could be done in this way?

Going over the drawings@Alan

I think this is looking good? few things I might tweak to be a better curve.. There may be a few more things I wanna add in the orthodontist like the laser circle and maybe the finger part of the mitten shape..but this is how its going..working on the back now then ill be doing the iron warrior front then I need to draw the side views and back of iron warrior and do it all again..also need to get working on drawing animatic and jpj.

Premise Orthographic's

          

Older me

Front views

Younger me

         

               

Back view

I need a back view of the older me and also side views which I will be working on next and then I am going to try manga studio to do the lines or any program that works best for me getting crisper lines.

Drawing things in the same design style language.

eyebrow bounce

Sculpting tk2

Edited Storyboard@Alan@Phil

Part I added in 

• First you see me in amor reading a rule book with the background.
• it zooms in.
• You then see a dice get rolled into the scene which I look at.
• zooms into dice.
• cut outs of the various races I mention come from each side of me.
• Until there is one of Perturabo which is bigger and I go on one knee as I describe him.
• 
  

Close up of my face in awe and happy then perturb close up. 

Ok so there was script changes and the part that lost interest was the Warhammer area so what I have storyboarded is me in my iron warrior amor 3d modelled..with the background image plane much like the wedding one being the tabletop terrain and so the things mentioned like dice can be an object in the scene, and the miniature character's I thought could be cut out's that can go in and out of the scene. not only will this be more interesting and allow for more interesting ways to show thing's but will connect with the way the first part was done.

Script:

@Everyone

Does anybody know why the image plane is not showing up in render? I wanted to try get some things planned with some renders and I have tried looking for things online and nothing seems to be working...considering I have spent way too long trying to figure this kind of thing out I'm going to start doing orthographic's and work on editing the animatic storyboard to get it finalised. now that the script has been edited, I need to make it more of a dream sequence more fun etc me as buzz can go through to meet iron warrior etc more screen time so on less like a shopping list..

My list and setting up ready for tests in Maya.

Setting up the scene test in Maya/ image planes etc.

so I have just been setting up an idea of how I could have the image planes to make a room specifically for the first part of the test. I am going to have a floor that is modelled and some tables. I want to redo the current image plane so you can see it more and have everything more continuous line so I need to do two more image planes after I've corrected this one and then I want to add light to where that would roughly be, shadow's. camera's and I also want to bring moom into it so I can be a better judge of the space/animation camera angles, lots of stuff and once textured a better judge of how the character could stand out. I think the image plane's may need to be bigger e.t.c

I am going to be uploading all my progress as I go this is just the very basic of what I had in my head. 

I also plan on doing tests for the other scenes once I've done some with this scene but I need to revisit the storyboard/animatic first if warhammer is more of a memory based scene like this. etc so I thought I would stick to this for now. 

Submission Commitment

• A fully realised animatic/storyboard
• Orthographic's
• Maya test's including the set's image planes camera's 
• Maya test's of the texturing of costume asset's on moom.
• Bringing moom into these set's to get an idea of the animation.
• Maya test's of modelling certain object's and how they will be textured.
• Character bible's 

Premise Interim Crit

Full Premise For infinity rough Animatic and matching storyboard.